Thought for the Day:
“We are lonesome animals. We spend all our life trying to be less lonesome. One of our ancient methods is to tell a story begging the listener to say — and to feel — ‘Yes, that’s the way it is, or at least that’s the way I feel it. You’re not as alone as you thought.'”
~ John Steinbeck ~
Gifts for My Writer Friends:
In the agent search? HERE Diana Urban has a good post with My 6 Top Tips for Authors Querying Literary Agents.
Better scenes make for a better book. HERE is a good article from Writer’s Digest by James Scott Bell with 5 Tips to Strengthen Your Scenes.
Voice, voice, voice. Every time I read a post by an agent or author that asks what they are looking for, voice comes up. But what is it? HERE Jan Fields from the Institute of Children’s Literature has a great post on Discovering Your Author Voice.

I mentioned last week that I had been uncomfortable, but it was really more than that. I was having some serious stinging, shocky pain, and I couldn’t figure out what was going on. I was able to get in to see the podiatrist. He ordered an x-ray, and we got an answer. Somehow, even though I had been pretty good about staying off my feet, I managed to fracture a bone in my foot. I can’t figure out when or how it happened, but it did. No more whimsical walks to the kitchen to get an apple or wandering into my study to pick up a book without combining the trip with a necessary trip to the bathroom. I don’t take a single step without thinking hard about whether I can wait for another time. My daughter Sara and her family have been coming over more often, and I’m letting them do more things for me (I hate that!). They are my heroes. The pain isn’t so bad now. The doctor has ordered another x-ray for two weeks from now, so we shall see just how long this will take. It’s a good thing I have plenty of reading material!

I think this week will be the last of my non-fiction picture books for middle-graders. I don’t think I have any more in the hopper, but I can’t go into my study and dig through books either. But this is a good one to finish with. It’s a rather sophisticated book that will do well with older middle-graders and above, especially those interested in art and culture. FROM PYRAMIDS TO PALACES: Architecture around the World comes from Albatros Media as did THE SECRET LIFE OF THE FOREST that I featured last week. It looks like Albatros Media is bringing books to the US that were originally written in other languages. I have enjoyed both these books and hope they keep bringing us wonderful books from other countries. Here is my review.
When one looks around, one will see a tremendous variety in designs of structures. Young people will wonder why there are so many different looks to what are basically all buildings. This wonderful book takes young readers on a journey through time and distance to take a look at structures from the Great Pyramid of Giza to the Palace of Versailles, from the Hagia Sofia to the White House. With sections of four to six pages, there is room to show drawings of the structure as well as cut-away drawings or floor plans and close-up drawings of significant parts such as columns or turrets as well as similar structures. The text, written by Tom Velcovsky, addresses the style and how it was developed, what the influences were, and how history played a role. The writing is conversational and accessible for young readers and shows excellent research. The illustrations by Marie Kraus are spectacular in their detail, yet have the warmth and richness that can only be found in illustration as opposed to photographs. While the book is marketed to young readers, ages 10 to 14, it will appeal to older readers as well.
Please don’t forget to check for other Marvelous Middle-Grade Monday posts at Greg Pattridge’s blog HERE.
This book makes me think of past sixth grade students who always loved non-fiction books having to do with history.
Just back from a baseball trip, Rosi. One of my high school buddies and I went to two River Cat games. We had planned to go to a Giants game, but his wife had a biking accident and is recovering from a broken hip, so he needed to stay closer to home. We also enjoyed some kayaking and got in a 20 mile bike trip. The old body hung in there the whole time, though I was pretty sore.
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Sounds like you had a great trip to Sacramento! Glad it went so well. Thanks for the comment.
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I hope your foot heals quickly. It’s great that your daughter is coming to help more. And thanks for the Diana Urban link. She has some good suggestions.
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So glad you found a link you like. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I know it’s hard to write when you are in pain and don’t have all the medical answers. You are brave to be diligent and sharing with us. All my best. Beth
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Thanks, Beth. What a nice comment.
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Sorry to hear about your foot. We are such fragile creatures! THis book looks terrific. Adding it to my grandkids lists of books to buy!
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And we get more fragile with age. Sigh. Glad you like the look of this book. Thanks for the comment.
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When it rains it pours and that goes for your continued recovery. I hope this latest setback will move you forward at last. Enjoy the extra help even though you’d rather be up and around doing it yourself.
The links had me processing a lot of information. I loved the one on voice. Thanks for finding these gems.
I’ve enjoyed all of your non-fiction picture book reviews but this one really has me interested. So many kids are fascinated by architecture and places around the world they would someday like to visit.
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You’re welcome. I’m so glad you find the links helpful. This is a book your students would like. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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So sorry about you foot, Rosi. I hope it heals soon. I also hope your other health issues have resolved. Thank you for all the good things you share despite the difficulties. Your blog is one of my “go to” blogs.
That was a great article about voice. It certainly makes me feel better about the fact I’ve been reading and not writing during Rajan’s surgery and recuperation.
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Thanks. I’m sure it’s healing up. Glad to know you like my blog, and so glad you found a link that works for you. I’ve been reading much more than writing lately. Good to see you here.
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