Thought for the Day:
“Writing is a completely private act. It’s in a way like play but very serious play, and sometimes I can escape into the fictional world that I’m creating so fully as to see hours go by without my noticing it. I think that kind of suspension of time and that mindfulness is a real gift.”
~ Antonya Nelson ~
Gifts for My Writer Friends:
Show don’t tell is very good advice, but according to the article HERE by Andrea Lundgren writing for Ryan Lanz’s blog there are times When Just Showing Isn’t Enough.
I’m always looking for good hints for finding comp titles. Alyssa Matesic has a good post HERE on How to Pick Comp Titles for Your Query Letter.
Revision is something none of us can avoid, so we might as well learn to do it well. HERE is a great article by Jessica Brody with The Most Organized Way to Revise a Novel.

I hope you all had a wonderful Thanksgiving with plenty of family time and good food. We sure did. I made gravy. Yup. That’s all I had to do. My daughter Sara and my granddaughter, Gracie, came over early and cooked up a storm. Sara made a juicy, delicious turkey, and Gracie made everything else — delectable appetizers, a raft of side dishes, and a second gravy, as well as perfect cheesecake and the best chocolate pie I have ever tasted. The next day, my grandson, Gehrig, talked Gracie into making another pie crust (she makes the very best pie crusts!), and Gehrig made a spectacular turkey pot pie. It’s a good thing we don’t do this very often. Anything that tastes as good as all that food can’t be good for us. I only gained two pounds, so that was a victory for me.

As many of you know, I love, love, love good survivor stories, so when I see one, I grab it. When I ran across THE FLICKER by H. E. Edgmon, I couldn’t resist. I almost resisted because it is a post-apocalyptic novel, and I’m not always a big fan of those, but the survivor part of it won out. I’m glad I chose to read it. But it’s more than just a survivor/post-apocalyptic novel. It’s also a story of what family means and also a coming-of-age story. It has a lot going on and a lot going for it. Here is my review.
Stepsisters Millie and Rose live with their parents (Millie’s mom and Rose’s dad) and their baby brother in an underground bunker since the Flicker, a sun flare that devastated Earth. Now both parents are dead, the kids are running out of food and have to go. They head for Millie’s grandmother, a Seminole, who understands the Earth. The girls meet a guy, Ben, driving a bus with several kids. They’d been at summer camp when the Flicker happened. They try to avoid the Hive where really bad people live while searching for other survivors. Can these kids find their way to good people or are they doomed?

H. E. Edgmon has written an intense post-apocalyptic novel with an interesting cast of middle-grade characters and only a few adults to lend the occasional assist. The kids are forced to take on difficult roles at a time when they are still trying to figure out just who they really are. As they fight to stay alive, they learn to cooperate and care for each other. Millie and Rose start out tolerating each other but become true sisters. The writing is a bit uneven and the end is predictable, but kids will love it.
I have a gently-read ARC of this book to give to one of you. All you need to do is be a follower (it’s free and easy — see the top, right corner of the post) with a US Address, and leave a comment. If you share the link to this post on social media, please let me know in your comment, and you will get an extra chance. And please don’t forget to check for other Marvelous Middle-Grade Monday posts at Greg Pattridge’s blog HERE.
Yeah, those post-apocalyptic stories are not my favorites either. Someone else would probably appreciate this one more than me, so I’ll pass on the drawing. Back to the gym tomorrow for me. I’ve got to get off the holiday roll.
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I’m glad you had a good holiday. Me too. I’m glad this is a book kids will love. I’m sorry to keep passing on your giveaways but I have so many books to read.
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I understand about passing. I have piles of books to read. Thanks for reading and commenting though. I appreciate it.
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I hadn’t heard of this one so thanks for featuring your review on this week’s MMGM. I’d also give this one a go even though I’m with you on a reluctance towards post-apocalyptic stories. Love the Brody article on revision. Thanks for always finding these gems. Also glad you had a great Thanksgiving. Now it’s on to the next holiday!
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On to the next holiday indeed. They come at a furious pace this time of year. Thanks for always reading and commenting. I appreciate it. Good luck in the drawing.
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I’m not into apocalyptic stories–but I’m impressed that you liked it. So count me into the giveaway–I may find a young reader who wants to review it on my blog!
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I was surprised how much I liked it. I’m sure one of your kid reviewers would like it. You might too. Thanks for the comment. Good luck in the drawing.
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I’m another who isn’t keen on the post-apocalyptic tales, but find this one tempting! Maybe it’s the whole middle-grader thing. Anyway, I’d read it.
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It’s a good one. Maybe you will be the lucky winner. Good luck in the drawing. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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This story sounds like it has a lot of the things I like to read. Definitely adding this one to my reading list! Thanks, Rosi. 🙂
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It’s a good one. Maybe you will be the winner! Good luck in the drawing. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks for the links, Rosi (and the laugh!). I think the book sounds interesting (though obviously I’m not eligible for the giveaway). Thanks for sharing and have a great week!
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Glad to hear you liked things on the post. Hope you can find the book across the pond. Thanks for the comment.
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I have an ARC of this book, but I haven’t managed to read it yet. I definitely need to move it higher on my list because it sounds fantastic!!
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I think you will like it. Hope you can get to it soon. Thanks for reading and commenting. Please subscribe to enter future drawings for giveaways.
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