Thought for the Day:
“It didn’t occur to me that my books would be widely read at all, and that enabled me to write anything I wanted to. And even once I realized that they were being read, I still wrote as if I were writing in secret. That’s how one has to write anyway — in secret.”
~ Louise Erdrich ~
Gifts for My Writer Friends:
We all need to challenge our characters to step outside their comfort zones. Otherwise, our stories would be pretty boring. HERE is a post by Kathleen McCleary on Writer Unboxed called Out of Character that tackles that problem.
If our stories don’t have authenticity, no one will want to read them. HERE Elizabeth Havey has a great post on Writer Unboxed called What Was That Phrase About Authenticity? that you will want to read.
And when it comes to Authenticity, how can you approach that when creating a fictional town? HERE is a great article from Writer’s Digest by L. G. Davis that will give you 8 Tips for Creating Believable Fictional Towns.

My hope for this week is that everyone will get out and vote! That’s all I’ll say about that. The World Series was exciting, but now all I can think about is how long it will be until opening day! I am making some progress on my computer problems. I took my laptop to the Apple store this week (second visit), and they sent it in to have a new keyboard installed. It seems to have solved my problem. What was amazing is that I was only without my laptop for three days! I love Apple. On the other hand, I have been struggling with my desktop Mac for quite a while. I had an appointment to have the Geek Squad come out and see if they could make things work faster and get rid of the spinning wheel of death. The appointment had to be moved due to the technician having a family emergency, and while I was talking to the agent, he asked me about my problems. He explained to me that with a nine-year-old computer, nothing they could do would really improve performance. Yeah. Nine years old. I hadn’t realized it had been so long. So I ordered a new desktop computer which will be set up for me in a couple weeks. I can’t wait! It will have a larger screen and lots of memory. One of the things I do on my desktop is layout for the California Writers’ Club newsletter. I love doing layout, but it had become such a chore with an old slow computer. I can’t wait for the next issue! Now if I could just get WordPress to work properly…

Earlier this year, I read and reviewed a wonderful book called Every Missing Piece by Melanie Conklin. You can read my review HERE. Previously, I had read and liked Counting Thyme also by her. So when I saw a new book by her, A Perfect Mistake, available for review from the Portland Book Review, I requested it right away. No disappointment here. It is a wonderful book. Here is the review I wrote for PBR.

Max is having a hard time at the beginning of sixth grade. He is the tallest kid in his class by a lot and has been recently diagnosed with ADHD. One of his two best friends, Joey, isn’t speaking to him, and the other, Will, is in the hospital in a coma. Max doesn’t remember what happened, but he feels responsible and doesn’t know how to figure out what went wrong the night Will was hurt. Max makes friends with a girl, Sam, whose brother was there the summer night. Sam wants to be a journalist, and she and Max start doing their own investigation. A lot of people are lying, and Max starts to remember things. Will they ever solve the mystery of what happened to Will?
Melanie Conklin has created a great cast of characters who will challenge readers to examine themes of friendship, loyalty, family, bullying, and much more. This is a rich, complex story told in first-person by main character Max, and Conklin stays true to that eleven-year-old boy. The dialogue is spot on and the representation of Max dealing with his ADHD and other issues is very credible. This is a terrific book.
Please don’t forget to check for other Marvelous Middle-Grade Monday posts at Greg Pattridge’s blog HERE.
This book sounds like a great read, Rosi. Thanks for recommending it.
The Erdich quote is terrific. I feel that writers should stay true to themselves and not just write something because it’s what’s popular right now.
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Thanks, Pete!
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Thanks for the comment, Pete. It is a great book. I like that quote too. It’s a good one.
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Glad your computer problems got resolved. Thanks for the links. I bookmarked the fictional town one because I want to create one for a new series someday. Melanie’s book sounds fantastic, and I have it on reserve at the library. Glad you enjoyed it so much.
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Happy reading!
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I can’t wait for my new computer! Glad you like the links. You will like this book, Natalie. It’s a good one.
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Great to hear you got your laptop sorted, and it will be fantastic to get the new Mac. Nine years is a long time in computers so you will see a massive difference! This book sounds great. I must watch out for it, thanks for sharing!
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I hope you can find the book over there. It’s worth your time, Valinora. Thanks for the comment.
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I agree, Rosi. It shines with authenticity, doesn’t it? All the best to you and your new friend Mac 🙂
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Thank you!
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My friend Mac will be here and set up the end of the week. Anxiously waiting here, Donna. Thanks for reading.
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Glad to hear your computer issues are slowly being fixed. Enjoy the new desktop. I’ve enjoyed Melanie’s other books so will need to give this a looksie. Happy MMGM to you and have a lovely week.
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Thanks, Brenda!
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My new desktop will be installed late this week. Yay!. Glad to find another Melanie Conklin fan here, Brenda. Enjoy this one! Thanks for reading.
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This story sounds so compelling. You got me with the memory loss and the friend who is a wanna be journalist. Sounds like there is much to discover. Great review.
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Happy reading!
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This book is right up your alley, Patricia. You will like it. Thanks for your kind comments.
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I also loved this book as shared in my review last summer (https://gpattridge.com/2022/07/17/a-perfect-mistake/). The characters and plot are good enough to read the story again. Melanie has quickly become one of my favorite authors.
Thank for the links. I really enjoyed the third one on creating a fictional town.
I appreciate having you be a part of MMGM again this week.
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Your review is one of the reasons I chose this book, Greg. Thanks. So glad you find the links useful. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Thanks, Greg! 🙂
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Thanks for the review. This books sounds super.
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You’re welcome, Carol. It is a super book. Thanks for the comment.
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Happy reading, Carol! 🙂
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Thanks for the terrific post, Rosi! I appreciate you profiling Melanie Conklin’s books. She’s a new author to me. I look forward to reading her work.
Also, my sympathies…computer problems are no fun and the spinning wheel of death is especially fearsome.
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Her books are definitely worth your time. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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